"Walka o sprawiedliwosc" [Archiwum]

Pokaż pełną wersje : "Walka o sprawiedliwosc"

marivek

31-05-2008, 20:40

Spis Treści
Prolog:
Pierwsza cześć-STRONA 1
Druga część-STRONA 1
Trzecia część-STRONA 1
Rozdział Pierwszy
Pierwsza część-STRONA 1
Druga część-STRONA 1

Prolog

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marivek

31-05-2008, 20:41

kenin

31-05-2008, 20:54

Wejdz (http://pocalujmniewdupe.pl/tyleczki.php?album=8994)
7,10 to powiekszone ale dam 7.5/10 bo fajne ;]

@edit
DOUBLE POST

Kashek

31-05-2008, 21:25

1/10. "Shofaj swojom dupe hóju".

Xylion

01-06-2008, 11:56

Facet, który ma na imię Dayla. Żal mi cie

Askaral

01-06-2008, 12:48

Niech zgadne, ci zolnierze zabija mu ojca, matke i stryjeczna ciotke matki jego ojca, a on sie wyszkoli i zabije zuego krola ktory naslal zolnierzy !!!
Przejedzony temat.

marivek

01-06-2008, 19:30

Part 1
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Niech zgadne, ci zolnierze zabija mu ojca, matke i stryjeczna ciotke matki jego ojca, a on sie wyszkoli i zabije zuego krola ktory naslal zolnierzy !!!
Przejedzony temat.

Może ogórki do tego?

#down
Może byś coś ocenił a nie coś gadasz że chce być fajny i coś o flamentio...

Hagi-Magi

01-06-2008, 19:44

@marviek
Nie probuj byc fajny bo ci nie wychodzi, <Tak samo jak mi ;<>
Czekaj...."Flamentio" kojazy mi sie z "Flamenko" ty sie zaczoles hiszpana uczyc? :P
Dla mnie fake jest slaby 4/10 na zachete

Virusmaxi

01-06-2008, 20:17

@up
Lol po czym wnioskujesz że on próbuje być fajny...?

@top

Fake jest w sumie całkiem niezły, masz te 7/10

Suhayl

01-06-2008, 21:37

Ok, poświecę się i skomentuję. Czuj się wyróżniony.

- Bardzo często robisz błędy ortograficzne. "Pomuc na przykład. To słowo piszemy przez "ó". Jeśli nie jesteś pewnien jak napisać jakieś słowo, sprawdź w słowniku. Nawet wyszukiwarka "Google" może pełnić jego funkcję.
- Fabuła w małym stopniu przypomina mi "Księgę Losu" użyszkodnika Gargoin_rtn. Jednak skupia się to do "Zostanę jednym z buntowników" U Garga było "Wstąpię do WZW". Ale to takie moje zboczenie.
- Robisz puste lokacje. Osobiście radzę korzystać z dodatków do trawy, oraz zmniejszyć rozmiar obrazków. Mniej będzie przestrzeni do zapełnienia.
- Obrazek 14. Ta aura jest bardzo brzydko wykonana. Moja rada: Użyj Photoshopa lub Gimpa. Poza tym, efekt kuli energi mógłby być podświetlony Photoshopowym "Blaskiem Zewnętrznym".
- Obrazek 7 i 8. Siekiera wbita w drzewo wygląda brzydko. Moja rada: Następnym razem wykonaj na niej Czarną Obramówkę

Patrząc na poziom upadającego działu, twój fake wypada dość dobrze. Patrząc na szkolną skalę zasługujesz na 4+

Sycrus

01-06-2008, 21:50

Fajne fajne czekam na reszte 9/10 B) Mi sie bardzo podobają ale ten łuk...:)
Bardzo ładne Juz czekam na nastepne Powodzenia :cup::cup::cup::cup::cup:

Ptakuba

01-06-2008, 22:11

Nie est źle, mogło być gorzej ;) Jak to rzekł Suhayl:
Patrząc na poziom upadającego działu, twój fake wypada dość dobrze.

marivek

02-06-2008, 16:41

marivek

04-06-2008, 19:45

Sry za double posta ale inaczej nie odzwieże ;p

Part 2

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marivek

28-06-2008, 16:58

A comi tam dam next part.

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Absters2345

28-06-2008, 17:09

Nieno, niezłe FAKE... Lux fabuła... Może szukasz jakiegoś nowego ziomka, którego spotkają, lub będą potrzebowali do pomocy... Jak coś pisz na gg:

8281668 lub skype: pankos6

Meshiam

29-06-2008, 02:00

zawodowe :) daje 9.5/10 jak już nie jeden napisał bo zawsze może być lepiejB)

marivek

29-06-2008, 08:14

Ostatnia część.

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THE END

Devus_

29-06-2008, 10:01

Bardzo mi się podoba! Szkoda że już koniec Ale mam jedną uwage:
-Łucznicy nie napinają łuków

@down

Zajebisty podpis :D

Spoilerek

29-06-2008, 10:29

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/7791/cosgh6.png

pwn3d xD
za poprzedni fake 10/10
za caly fake 9/10 bo troche krótki :/